[Suraj76626]

Wahhh..... what an amazing erotica!  I like to share few of my thoughts....

Toppo
I feel pity for him. I can only imagine his desperation of looking at the shipra's curves but unable to make a move. i hope he gets his revenge.

Namrata
Although she is shipra's best friend. i can clearly see she is jealous of shipra.

Alok and shipra's ex
Two lucky bastards.

Aditi sachdeva and Rakhi singh
They both require separate threads....part 2 may be?

and finally shipra
There is a little slut hiding deep into the conscience of her mind.
with the right kind of man, the slut will come out and dance naked.

Thanks man,

Let see how the story shapes up. Hope it will satisfy your expectations.

You are almost right about Namrata, she is not jealous as such of her beauty or success, she herself is a beauty at par with Shipra which readers will later learn. She is just aggravated whenever Shipra tries to lecture her on morality. She feels that Shipra is looking down on her as she has used shortcuts for getting favours in the past.

Alok is definitely lucky but not as lucky as her ex.. you'll see.

A spin off with Rakhi's story is definitely in my mind... Let see if I get enough time in future to see that through.

You are totally right about Shipra... Keep reading your suggestions are welcome.