20-06-2019, 02:40 AM
(13-06-2019, 07:34 AM)Fuckerwala Wrote: Iske pahle v hamne do comment kiye the. Avi main dance party padh raha hun Or kahani bahut aage hai to kahani k bare me comment karna thik nahi hai. Lekin aap bahut achchha likh rahe ho. Aisa lag raha hai ki agar kahani band ho gayi to jaan chali jaayegi. So ab reader ki jaan aapke hanthon me hai. Bacha lijiyega na? Thanks for writing. Keep writing. Thanku so much
Shukriya mitra kahani ko shuru se padne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye. Mai koshish karunga ki aapki jaan na jae isliye kahani ko uske ant se pehle band nahi karunga ha kuchh niji karan se kabhi kabhar update me deri jaroor ho sakti hai philhaal world cup chal raha to update nahi likh pata.