Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Bobby9034]

Am I the only one looking forward to both Hariya AND Ramu having hot sex with Anita?

What’s with the whole Ramu “hasn’t earned his right to fuck Anita” what qualifications or hardship does he have to go through so that he is worthy?!! Come on people this is ridiculous, we are all here to read a well written hot erotic story.  Currently two very horny men are with a beautiful sexy and very horny woman and I’m looking forward to see how this unfolds. I personally hope the three have a whole night of hot passionate sex, where she is fucked by Hariya AND Ramu but that’s just me the writer might take it somewhere else,  but please stop with the Ramu hasn’t “earned it” 

Seanbro great story, loving it, you have amazing writing skills.  Hope you don’t mind, but I do have one criticism.  I understand you wanting to build up the seduction but the whole ‘Are you liking it memsaheb?’ ‘Yes, I’m liking it’ ‘Are you liking it memsaheb?’ ‘yes I’m liking it’ … is getting a bit repetitive.  I’m not saying they need to bang straight away but it feels like the story is moving at a snail’s pace with not a lot happening.  I know the seductive part needs to be stretched but too much and it loses the momentum you’ve so beautifully built.  I hope you don’t mind my comments, just my POV, thought to be honest with how I see it.