Romance సుజాత ఆంటీ ప్రేమాయణం

[Bellakaya]

Me salahali suchanalu chala avasram maku...me suggestions pariganaloki theskunta.... sujatha lo vividha konalni readers interst taste batti marusthu vunta

Readers interest based chesukoni maarusthu velthe character konni characterization ki minus avutuundi. (Minimal changes undali ) Anthe thappa chadive readers andari interest based chesukoni change cheyyadam sadhyam kadu.  

Anavasaram ga aa pics petti, katha kante pics valla imaginative brain anedi reader ki help avvadu, eppudu aithe oka reader katha and narration, anduloni emotions tho travel avvagaluguthado aa narrative time lo thanani thanu imagine chesukuni anandapadali adi chala baguntundi. Veelu aithe alanti prayathnam cheyyandi. 

Avoid using pics unnecessarily.  Those are my prime suggestions .hope I haven't disappointed anyone's feelings. But expressed views as an individual and also as a reader.