13-04-2024, 11:39 AM
Welcome back Sean after this long time, hope you doing well, readers missed anita so bad that now you have to compensate it with quick and long updates, as far these updates are concerned, the physical location and detailing has taken a lot of your efforts, these are good for long run as it shows how much the writer is involved in the storyline and plot, for some readers it may be too much, but for story which is this long, it is enough, I consider anita Singh as long erotica, not some random story. And it justifies it's existence.. in second part of update where ramu is ready for action from back side and maybe hariya get the BJ, I think it is time to show some action as backgrounding is enough done. Best part is environment and engagement where cooperation between character is going on. I think that is best. But kindly give description of male private parts as well bcz this is where you cannot put everything to readers. It's your story where your description is needed, also give some space to outdoor action and add any character like 'Jeetu' imo he would have been perfect material for this kind of overt yet covert actions. Kindly do consider.