08-04-2024, 11:08 PM
(08-04-2024, 10:38 PM)xossissippi Wrote: Great story writing! Absolutely loved the slow build-up so far.
The way you built up Sukanya's character is very amazing. She's shy and incredibly beautiful but rapidly adopting to please her husband, what a dutiful wife.
Can you also write her perspective as how she's feeling inside when things are getting heated. How erotic she's feeling, how her mind is taking over, how her breathing is high, how her pussy is leaking etc.
How she's torn between values and tradition and equally horny. These things add to eroticism. I incredibly love her character. Her character progression has been great up to now. She's slowly finding comfort in being without inners that is very erotic! The husband is training her well.
The seduction game set forth by Sharath is well written. The last update was extremely erotic especially the part where now Sukanya knows their game plan. Now what does she do?? Does she inform her husband about it or does she skip that part to husband and play along with Meena's games thinking that she'll outsmart them.
We are yet to see what is that "Husband's Mistake"! Can't wait for the next update,
don't bother too much by overwhelming response for the last update being turning into forced one... So far the seduction game has been strong and I trust the author's plan on how it will make sense in the future updates and why they're behaving the way they are behaving.
very well said bro. Her erotic feelings will be great to read