Adultery A husband's mistake

[rahulishere]

HI OP, great story, loved it.

But can i share my detailed thoughts in PM? I know you have already thought how the story will be. But I just want to share my thoughts as a daily reader.

As I think there are enough stories already with the stud amoral cunning bull, loser husband, idiot trapped wife trope. The story was going at a nice pace where the characters where good people and Meenas affair was working as a catalyst in SUK to open up and the husband to egg on the wife with. Also maybe this could have led to meena breaking Suk's conservative shackles and slowly make her dress sexy to the husbands delight and also become adventurous and be physically friendly to males.

Also have only the Husbands POV, as we started the story that way, and not have others POV. This breaks the illusion and the consistency of the story. We can see it unfold through the husbands eyes. The teasing, suk opening up, meenas affair, and how it is desensitising SUK. Also husband would trust wife and vice versa and wife would relate to husband after things happen and maybe once in a while the four would get together.

Also I imagine her to be Tamil big boss actress Sakshi Agarwal( in black hawaii bikini and transparent saree)

Cheers. let me know ill PM.



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Thank you so much for your view and analysis. I would surely love your inputs. Please do reach out in PM or email. BTW I love the model you reference. I believe it's for Sukanya, right?