30-03-2024, 03:44 PM
krish_999 ji,
Great plot, and your story telling is amazing, fully conscious of Manav's mental state, still request to be more descriptive on the sexual scenes.
Will we get an account of Shubha's view on how she fell for Sethu for her first time? or was she forced for the first time and enjoyed? What was her emotions on cheating?
And Kudos to your efforts, that you make the stories complete, and not leave mid-way?
Biosys
Great plot, and your story telling is amazing, fully conscious of Manav's mental state, still request to be more descriptive on the sexual scenes.
Will we get an account of Shubha's view on how she fell for Sethu for her first time? or was she forced for the first time and enjoyed? What was her emotions on cheating?
And Kudos to your efforts, that you make the stories complete, and not leave mid-way?
Biosys
Emotion In Motion, A Dirty Mind