29-03-2024, 02:25 PM
(This post was last modified: 29-03-2024, 03:08 PM by manasi. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
There's no doubt excessive description of sexual acts. Though the forum is for erotica, unfortunately the readers are mostly interested in flow of storyline rather than sexual activities.
As the story evolves with POV of protagonists, I rather expected the psychology of the characters to dominate the episodes. Anyway, the end is neigh. Shortly Bhavani is going to be exposed. Author earlier had explained to build the Bhavani character as a woman who experiment on her adulterous sexual evolution and could possibly make an end to the affair iff not exposed. I am looking forward to seeing her psychology once she is exposed.
As regards to Vikram, he doesn't love Bhavani in real sense. So, Vikram willingly marrying Bhavani would be definite character aberration.
Let's see how author do justify the characters.
manasi
As the story evolves with POV of protagonists, I rather expected the psychology of the characters to dominate the episodes. Anyway, the end is neigh. Shortly Bhavani is going to be exposed. Author earlier had explained to build the Bhavani character as a woman who experiment on her adulterous sexual evolution and could possibly make an end to the affair iff not exposed. I am looking forward to seeing her psychology once she is exposed.
As regards to Vikram, he doesn't love Bhavani in real sense. So, Vikram willingly marrying Bhavani would be definite character aberration.
Let's see how author do justify the characters.
manasi