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Fantasy పిల్లల కోసం నగ్న పూజ- 1-11
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Manchi concepts tho vastunnaru... but story ni ela rayalo telika ila mamoluga end chestunnaru.... but concept chala kottaga chala fresh ga undi...ilanti concept ni intha direct ga explain cheseytam konchm badhaga undi bro anthe...

Mundu wife nd husband ki problem annaru...vallu konchm suffer avtunnatlu discussion la konni dylogs rayochu...

Like sandhya ramana tho attagaari poru padalekapotunna andi ani ramana adem patinchukoku ma amma anthe ani ofc ki vellipovatam..ala two three days tarwata sandhya vachi meku oka vishayam cheppali nammutara ani swamiji vachi cheppina matter ni dylogs tho clear ga cheppatam...ramana starting lo nammakapovatam ala kuda untada ani and final ga veellu akkadiki start avvatam... akkadiki vellatam a temple ni explain cheyyatam....ila boledu story rayochu bro....story concept raasama ane daani kante entha intresting ga narrate chesam entha realistic ga reader ki chupincham ane daani meeda success untundi.... manushula feelings anevi chala important and a detailings tho story raasi chudu...adiripoddi...all the best...naku concept nachindi kabatti intha msg chesanu....hope u understand...
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RE: పిల్లల కోసం నగ్న పూజ- 1-2 - by Veeeruoriginals - 25-03-2024, 01:52 PM



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