Adultery Bhabi, Beggar and Blunder

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I had few questions, regarding this update. I am writing the text in bold so its easier to notice.

• First, what do you guys feel about the length of the act itself? While writing I felt it was long but after reading I think I rushed things to end quickly. What do you think?
  
• Second, what do you think of me adding constant POV of Shreya while Rani and Chandu were engaged in the act. Was it too distracting?
  
• Third, I have a basic idea in mind about what happens next in the story but I would really love and appreciate your suggestions
  
• And last, please let me know if you liked the story so far. I got the idea from a half-baked Hindi story I read years ago. So I decided to expand the story into an entire saga.
  

Thank you for reading and please let me know how you felt about it and provide some constructive criticism to do better in future.

A1 - The length was perfect and well described.

A2- with Shreya's POV it became more erotic and has potential for an extended story.

A3- Further idea - Chandu se well spoken and can do everything like a normal person. he fooled everyone. Now he blackmails both the ladies. takes virginity of Shreya. 

A4- It was a very nice story. Appreciate your efforts and creativity.

Thanks and Regards