24-02-2024, 06:30 PM
Bro have been following this story of yours since starting, that means for more than "half a year", never commented about the updates because each and every update worth a week wait, was enjoying the story very much and i appreciate your faithful commintment on one week one update thing....everything was fine...
The one of the most important thing I was waiting for past 3-4 months was the slow roleplay fuck (like you do in most of them) between this bull MOHAN and mature widow PROMILA.
But what you did?? the fuck scene between them was barely of 3 lines?? Why?? It was kind of "ruining the orgasm thing"....if done properly it could been the one of the best stories here!
why you rushed the last chapters?? (although described dreams of a person again n again in most of the chapters elongating it).
PLEASE CONSIDER TO REPLY TO THIS MESSAGE to one of your old reader!
thankyou!
The one of the most important thing I was waiting for past 3-4 months was the slow roleplay fuck (like you do in most of them) between this bull MOHAN and mature widow PROMILA.
But what you did?? the fuck scene between them was barely of 3 lines?? Why?? It was kind of "ruining the orgasm thing"....if done properly it could been the one of the best stories here!
why you rushed the last chapters?? (although described dreams of a person again n again in most of the chapters elongating it).
PLEASE CONSIDER TO REPLY TO THIS MESSAGE to one of your old reader!
thankyou!