23-02-2024, 06:52 AM
You writing skills is wonderful but to be very honest for me story has lost its charm...it almost getting predicted what's next...no need to have sex sex and sex all the time...they should have roamed around like married couples hand in hand stuff like that...2 additional character are spoiling a well built story...instead they could have gone for a threesome with girija...else may be her hubby gets his work finished a day before and he surprises bhavani by landing there...all the best for next part