09-02-2024, 06:21 PM
(08-02-2024, 10:33 PM)befriend007 Wrote: Honestly my friend, this is not interesting. There is no situation, no thrill, no suspense, everything seems to be obvious. Try it in better way.
i would accept your view if this was a fantasy story my friend, but this is a real incident and wanted to say only things which happened in real in my house. So there won't be any exciting things like other stories.