29-01-2024, 01:35 AM
(This post was last modified: 29-01-2024, 01:36 AM by Lollobionda. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
In this chapter you have held up a mirror to your feelings and inner life and shared them
"without" many and artificial excesses with us readers and fans of this story.
You let us participate in it ...
This makes this story more human and provides a bridge between the emotional levels of
us readers and the main characters in the story...
* * *
Another thought that is germinating in my mind is,
(although it is not possible!)
that Meena's beloved uncle, Mansi, has been resurrected.
Or that his death was merely an incarnation to go into hiding from his creditors so that he
could later live under a different name and in a different city.
((This is just a thought experiment of mine! ))
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
"without" many and artificial excesses with us readers and fans of this story.
You let us participate in it ...
This makes this story more human and provides a bridge between the emotional levels of
us readers and the main characters in the story...
* * *
Another thought that is germinating in my mind is,
(although it is not possible!)
that Meena's beloved uncle, Mansi, has been resurrected.
Or that his death was merely an incarnation to go into hiding from his creditors so that he
could later live under a different name and in a different city.
((This is just a thought experiment of mine! ))
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda