21-01-2024, 09:14 AM
(21-01-2024, 08:12 AM)AnitaMathur Wrote: Very well written story. Ma bete ke beech ki dewaar kitni pyari tarikese din ba din kam hoti ja rehi hai.
Ek request hai , Viraj ko abhi itni jaldi Sonali ki 2 din ke liye apni maa ke aane ki wajah se firse ma beta jaise rehna ki baat nehi manni chahiye.
Viraj tabhi manega agar Sonali uske liye kuch aisa kare taki usse hamesha mehsus ho ki woh bas apni ma ke samne viraj ke saath ma beta banne ki dhoong kar rehi hai..
Jaise Viraj Sonali se shart rakta hai ki woh beta jaise rehna ki baat manega agar sonali apne kalai ya gardan pe Viraj ke naam ki love sign wali tattoo banwae..
Jo koi bhi saaf dekh sake.. sonali ke maa bhi..
Isse aur bhi baatein saaf hogi..
1. Viraj ko gussa ayega ki Sonali ki maa usse mara karti thi shaadi se pehle taki woh manoj se shaadi kar, isse Viraj ko ek sense of revenge mehsus hogi Sonali ke upar haath utha e ka.
2. Viraj Sonali ke andar ki badlaav dekh ke khush hai par jab Sonali ne kaha ki shaadi se pehle Sonali ki koi bf nehi thi toh usse iska pura yakeen nehi hoga kyunki abhi Sonali itni jyada khuli hui hai upar se agar Sonali ko Manoj pasand nhi tha toh pehli bar Sonali movie dekh ke ghaar aane ke baad Manoj ko koste hue kyu ungli karti..
Sonali agar tattoo banwati hai toh uski maa dekh ke agar uski maa usse pehle jaise firse batameezi kare ya even haath uthaye gusse me toh Sonali sach keh rehi hogi..
Aur agar Sonali ki maa uski tattoo dekh ke ignore kare toh Viraj ko shaq hoga ki maybe Sonali jitni seedhi bann rehi bai utni hai nehi, aur shaadi se pehle usne itni raangreliya khilayi ke uski maa bhi uski harqarein dekh ke kuch nhi kehti..So Viraj Sonali ke andar ki besharmi aur juada bahar nikal paye
3. Agar Sonali ki maa uspe gussa hoti hai aur haath uthati hai tatto dekh ke toh isse Sonali aur uski maa ki shaadi ke pehle jaise relation ban jaegi jab sonali single ladki thi.. jaisa ki Viraj Sonali ko chachta hai mentally.. kya pata shayaad is baar Sonali khud uski maa ko jawab de paye ki yeh uski life hai uski jo marjer kar sakti hai aur Sonali ki maa ko sabak mile
Suggestion acche hai. Sochta hu