29-12-2018, 08:19 AM
Quote:Originally Posted by spxossip
Nice update bro.....
Yaar bt sorry to say ki honesty ab story ne maja nhi aata.......
Ek to aap ek scene pura nhi likhte ho......ek update me story kuch bhi aage nhi badhti.......bas daily routine ki baato se 70% update bhara hua hota he ........main story bs 20-30% hi dikhti he.....to wo thoda boring lagta he......ye daily ke chores nhi likhe ya ek line me nipta sakte ho......use pura detail me likhke aap faltu me update khich dete ho.......aap khud hi soche is baare me ......jaise ki aap dekh rhe hai....cnmts bhi km isi vajah se aa rhe he.........again
I'm sorry agr aap ko bura lage to......
entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai and sorry k apko nirash hona pada...Maine pehle hi kaha tha k main koi writer nahi hun...bas aise hi likhne laga...but ap log mujhse jyada jante ho toh ab main kosish karunga k faltu ki bakwas na ho story mein....aur rahi bura manne ki baat toh apka haq banta hai mujhe sahi galat batane ka