21-12-2023, 05:34 PM
(15-12-2023, 10:05 PM)sri7869 Wrote: Nice ending
Thanks
(21-12-2023, 04:46 PM)Sunny8488 Wrote: Hi Itachi garu,Sunny bro this is a real incident happened on Karimnagar to Mancherial highway. Monkey gang killed him for the exact reason I mentioned in story. I thought of changing a little bit and put that ending. For character elevation I shown him as a software gig.
Mee story baagundi, but premature ending in my perspective.
Naa suggestion emitante.... vallaki Pelli ayyi... with love, emotions and offcourse with full of energy oka manchi sex scene write chesi muginchandi..... baguntundee....
Idi oka salaha leda request anukondee... Offcourse its upto you!
Thanks,
Sunny
Thanx both of you.