21-12-2023, 08:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 23-12-2023, 01:54 AM by darkharse. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
just red it today..fantastic start..plot is also nice..the way narrating is good...try to complete the story unlike many stories dropped off in middle...made her expose more in public and tease her more and more...
Add more n more Kinkyness to Shubha and make her play like homely bitch with fear but at same time lust is overcoming the fear of shame. good luck bro..
one suggetion..it seems missed describing her like her height weight, measurements and her qualities if any..may be you can cover in upcoming episodes.
Add more n more Kinkyness to Shubha and make her play like homely bitch with fear but at same time lust is overcoming the fear of shame. good luck bro..
one suggetion..it seems missed describing her like her height weight, measurements and her qualities if any..may be you can cover in upcoming episodes.
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