19-12-2023, 10:28 PM
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(19-12-2023, 12:19 PM)Basic Wrote: Buddhe log jo garib aur badsurat ho wohi Rupa ke hero bane to maza aayega. Story superhit hogi
Dear Sir abhi tak aapko kahani ka hero pata nahi chala esa lagta he,
Mene pahle hi kaha tha story ko dhyan se padhyega, story erotic or lambi chalne wali he,
Isliye story ke plot story ke samay ke anusar idhar udhar aayenge, aapko thoda dhyan se padna padega, ek hi bar me kiradar ki entry karke, kam khatam karke rafadafa kar du to story me maja nahi aayega,
Ha ye bat me manta hu ke meri hindi or grammar thoda week he, or me writer nahi hu bus abhi start kiya he to me jarur koshish karunga ki story or achche se likhu, so pls aap thoda correction karke padhyega, ? dhanyawad
Age ka update ke liye kam chalu he, pura hote hi post kar dunga ye mera wada he,
Dosto kahani ka hero kon he vo comment me jarur bataiyega,