16-12-2023, 11:47 AM
(16-12-2023, 11:08 AM)Vijay41 Wrote: buddy Don't spoil your excellent story-telling efforts with minor characters (Especially: Rajat, Beeva's nagging at Aditi)...I think many readers like me reading this story will not like it..As far as I'm concerned, I think sex is all about romance...In between Rajith and Beeva's characters are spoiling Aditi's mind and reading your story seems to be spoiling our hearts too..All men who go to prostitutes go with a sense of love. They go with a sense of lust...I see Aditi and Anna's relationship only as romantic feelings ...especially ..I ...Although there is a big age difference between Anna and Aditi (love is the same at all ages) ...I wish Aditi and Anna's relationship should be a long distance love relationship and not just sex...In this story of yours, Aditi and Anna's sex scenes are few, but it doesn't matter...But (Don't make Anna's character Dummy by bringing some other men between Samar, Aditi and Anna)...Friend, as a Tamil reader who reads this story with feelings and not with lust, I put my apology with great difficulty..Although it is difficult to read and write in english, I have written it through translator....I have read many love stories, but I love this story emotionally, it made me (shudder) so much...I love the idea of nostalgic…Sorry if there's anything in my opinion bro, friends...every day your watching tamil reader Vijay41...
100% agree bro aditi should only have sex with anna and her husband otherwise character of aditi will spoil if every third person should have sex with aditi I think you can add more fantasy between anna spruha and aditi like after going to appartment meena gives anna's used banyan and underwear with cum in that and aditi will have orgasm using smelling and licking that
As you are my favourite writer I think you can add these fantasies in best manner possible