16-12-2023, 11:38 AM
(16-12-2023, 11:08 AM)Vijay41 Wrote: buddy Don't spoil your excellent story-telling efforts with minor characters (Especially: Rajat, Beeva's nagging at Aditi)...
To many extra characters - To many distractions
Some do prefer this type of writing - But author is only going away from his original plot that centered around apartment and its folks.
Could have avoided these extra characters. Anyway Author's choice how he wants to write and Reader's choice how they react.