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Misc. Erotica Rupmati (Rupa) : A Rich housewife - Garibo ki khawabo Mallika
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(15-12-2023, 02:01 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Brilliant....
Bahut hi bhadiyaa....
Thoda emotional introspection add karo....
Sex scene ko detail. Me likhiye.....
Choti choti feelings wagerah ko detail mein bataye....
Likhte accha hai....
Thoda spellings per dhyan dijiye or
Dialogue form mein likho....
Lambi jaayegi story....
Agge ka intezaar hai....

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Me jarur koshish karunga dost
Mera grammar thoda week he, or hindi muje aati nahi he, lekin jyada se jyada Hindi sab log padhate he isliye mene hindi me likhne ka faisla kiya,

Story me plot  story ke mutabik thoda idhar udhar aayenge, kyoki ki samay ke anusar story ke mutabik  kirdar ko rakh raha hu, me nahi chahta ek kiradar ek hi bar me apna role khatam kar de, agar ek bar me role khatam ho jayega to erotic stories likhne ka koi matlab nahi he, ye aapko story jab khatam hogi tab ye sab pata chalega, bus aap har ek plot ko dhyan se padhyega, ek plot likhta hu to samaj jana ke aage ishka jarur kuch na kuch lena dena hoga,


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RE: Rupmati (Rupa) : A Rich housewife - Garibo ki khawabo Mallika - by Black shadow - 15-12-2023, 07:26 PM



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