13-12-2023, 08:42 AM
(12-12-2023, 12:08 AM)shawblack Wrote: I'm eagerly waiting for lakshmi part patiently. I know as a writer you know how to move the story, But I would like to give my opinion on certain things. You said that more important characters are coming to the story for lakshmi. But I feel that the tailor and the boys still have a lot of potential to be revisited where finally the son sees his mom having hardcore sex somehow. At some point it would be good if you bring back these characters and at the same time bring the new important characters. And as a fan request putting Lakshmi in multiple gangbangs is worthy of her character. It would be nice if Lakshmi travels a lot with other characters well and then finally comes to her son since her character potential is huge and limiting her character to just son would be underwhelming.I really appreciate your valuable review on my story...not only you but many readers impressed with " tailor and hooligan boys ..portion " and asking me to add some more episode with lakshmi, ..so i decided not to disappoint you readers....so once i complete shanthi - raaju episode i will bring back that tailor and hooligans for few episode ( for tailor 1 episode and for hooligan boys may be 2 or 3 episodes ) as they are not main characters so they cannot travel through out the stories , .. i cannot put lakshmi in multiple gang bangs , as i want to maintain her with homely traditional women ..unfortunately she's not but still i cant make her whore ...couple of main characters still to come once they introduced story will lead with that main characters, that politician guy is also one of the main character, going to travel through out the story ( that's why i limited his scenes with lakshmi ) .. , ... and lakshmi's son jeeva ..will take her mom at almost end of the story..so if ur expecting lakshmi and son jeeva sex scenes , have to wait .., some readers likes direct mom son sex scenes for them i have introduced shanthi and raaju , soon they will have direct sex ..i cannot reveal more..
And one of the main reason why your story is different and enjoyable than other stories is that you write the teasing part very well which is important to set the mood. A lot of stories fail to do that. Keeping that in mind if you could write teasing parts at the same level for all new characters for lakshmi it would be great
Note: These are my personal opinions.
so keep read my upcoming updates , and you're reviews are always welcome ..thank you..