09-12-2023, 12:04 PM
the story is progressing in very slow pace. The twist of three months seems unnecessary. It may again be twisted to two more days. Then Priyanka may go back since there would be a loss of her studies. The beggar should have his own place to live in. She can trap Suma after Priyanka has gone back. Then afterwards whenever Priyanka comes to farm house she can spend her time in the beggar's lap in his house.