[seansean007]

Hey Sean,

Frankly as always I personally don't have any problem with your long updates as they are filled with a lot of slow seduction and makes a reader ready for the bigger game but as a reader the problem arises when such an important sequence doesn't get completed quickly.
For instance this particular sequence is a slow seductive poison for sure but this slow poison makes the kill in one go. What's happening here is you are writing this particular sequence but sometimes as a reader it gets frustrating when in next update as well we find out that the slow process is still on and sometimes this next update comes after a week or two which makes us read the entire sequence until now again and again and to find out that we have still not reached 20% of what's cooking in your mind.....
Now here my suggestion is that you first write this entire sequence down. Take your time as much as you want, gather your thoughts and please don't rush this sequence but my only request here is to post the next update when you have completed this particular sequence completely so that you feel satisfied that this is exactly what you wanted to write. I want this slow poison but I want it to make the kill in one night only and not take several weeks.
Also when it comes to comments and likes, then a talented writer like you shouldn't worry about them as these things would automatically follow whenever you post an update. You are not able to see comments because there might be some readers who would be waiting for this entire sequence to end so that they can share their final feedback or there might be readers who have yet not found anything substantial to comment upon. So don't worry about comments, as I said they would come and with good substance once you complete this sequence but I would request you to post the next updates only when you have completed this sequence. Now during this time until you complete this sequence, there would be some restless readers like me asking you everything now and then about the update but you can just let us know that you are working on the update, just stay in touch so that we don't become super restless.

Cheers

Thanks a lot for your feedback. This is exactly what I expect. I was of the opinion that instead of making the readers wait, I should keep posting even small updates so that the readers have something to read, but your comment provided the reader's view that you are willing to wait for one big update where this event wraps up. I do not ask for unnecessary praise when I request for feedback. Feedback like this is what I expect along with a brief analysis of the update about how you felt while reading the update and what you think of action of the lead character, what kind of character she is exhibiting through her actions. These things keep the story alive and also give me something to read as well (since I already know the story, there is nothing for me in the story but the readers comments give me something to read). Thanks again for the kind words.