05-12-2023, 02:07 PM
(04-12-2023, 08:56 PM)Romain Wrote: Maayusi hoti hai jab aisa dhansu scene likhne kbaad sir2 comment aate hain.Bhai aap great writer ho.....
Meri kahni "Farebi ka Jaal" padehiye, sayad aako pasand aayegi.
Link niche de raha hun.
Farebi ka Jaal
https://xossipy.com/thread-54655-page-19.html
Mujhe yakeen hai sab aapki story padhke hilate hilate itna thak jaate hai ki cooment karne ki himmat hi nhi hoti.....
Mere jaise asli mard hi nhi Thakte......ab to muskura do yaar.... Mayus ho ke story padne mein maja nhi aata.....