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Misc. Erotica Rupmati (Rupa) : A Rich housewife - Garibo ki khawabo Mallika
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(04-12-2023, 03:16 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Writing are well....
Try to develope the plot....
Take it slow, detailed and seductive....
I am sure that the writing skills you have... This story would be a block bluster if there is continuity and different approach to the story....
Views and comments will eventually follow...



Thank you sir

Bus aap log isss tarah se thoda support kare, me janta hu mera grammar bahot week he, lekin me jarur koshish karunga spellings or plot ko develope karneka,


Bahot bahot dhanyawad sir

Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar Namaskar
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RE: Rupmati (Rupa) : A Rich housewife - Garibo ki khawabo Mallika - by Black shadow - 04-12-2023, 07:09 PM



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