04-12-2023, 03:06 PM
(04-12-2023, 08:43 AM)Fuckstar Wrote: Bhai mujhe lagta hai aap ye request bohot zada jaldi kar rahe ho..... Abhi to aapki story bohot nayi hai, characters develop ho rahe hai....
Story ke title ke hisaab se isme Kai mard aane ki possibility hai or abhi to ek hi mard aaya hai.....
Abhi to aap apni story ko aage badhaao, kuch nya kuch alag agar aapki story me readers ko dikhega to log apne aap reactions denge..... Thoda soch samajh kar updates do, spellings wagerah grammar wagerah thik Karo...... Updates ko jaldi jaldi khatam karne ke bajaye thoda detailing me dhyaan do..... Updates ko thoda or seductive bnaao..... Tabhi or maza aaega......
I think u r right ? sir
Thank you for suggestion & reply
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