Adultery He, She, Husband (Completed)

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You are awesome.....
Chilling sensational.....
Wonderful......

Nice update

Good one

It seems Bhavani has totally fallen out of love with her husband  and is engaging in sex with him just to avoid suspicion . Honorable thing for Bhavani would be to do divorce her husband .

Also ,author must progress the story a bit more ,this story at the moment is struck with nothing happening in each episode .

My advice would be to focus on the story more rather than the sexual encounters between Bhavani and Vikram .There has already been many encounters between them and it has  already has lost novelty .

I'm trying too but it follows mainly the plot I had already written in the Tamil version though there are significant changes from that in this version. I don't have the time to write long updates so the movement would seem slow. I'll try to make up for that by making sure the updates continue.

Waiting for updates....

As soon as possible.

Very nice

Yeah. I did enjoy the fuck fest initially but now it has become a common feature.  I think these xxx adventures & story itself will stop only when Bavani gets pregnant. 

I was among many that asked for continuation post initial marriage episode but looking back, I think story ending with marriage would have been ideal. 

Story has Good English language usage among other strength points. Lets see how Author plans ahead.  

This is primarily a story of a love affair between a married woman and her seducer, namely Bavani and Vikram so sex scenes between them can't be helped and is the core of the story. Other characters would come in where one would even be a challenge to Vikram but I can't give out too much of the plot though those who have read the story in Tamil would know what it is. This version though has significant changes from that original story.

Next part seems to be very hot. First night kind of setup and Complete submission of Bhavani to Vikram. High expectations from readers.

You are going good writer as usual.

Thank you. Hope the expectation are at least partially met.

Interesting

Awesome update as usual.....hoping to see Bavani deck herself up like a bride in a really low saree and a skimpy blouse to meet her paramour ...one of the best stories in xossipy currently

Thank You. Part of what you expected is in the next update.

The story has been great so far. This is an erotic story so erotic scenes has to be there.
I think there is going to be a twist in the tale soon. Mohan will suspect something soon enough. We will have to wait for the next episode.

What i like about your story is that your characters are well etched and the character development is believable.
Vikram is pure evil personified. He will go to any lengths to fulfill his wishes. He will manipulate and destroy people's lives as long as he gets what he wants. He will dump a pregnant Bhavani once he is done with her. He want to father a child but doesn't want to perform any of the duties associated with it.
Bhavani is slowly getting changed into a wanton slut. She now believes that she is not cheating her husband. She now has sympathy for him but slowly it will turn into disdain and hatred. Even if she gets dumped by Vikram, she will move on to another lover. She will carry Vikrams child eventually and will look down on her husband. She wont feel guilty about it.
Girija was Bhavani once upon a time. Somebody like Vikram eventually changed her into what she is today.
Mohan is a true blue gentleman and typical family man. He is the hero of this story. Needs to be seen how he ends up. One good thing author did is not to portray him as a cuckold or wannabe sissy. He is never going to accept that and eventually when he finds out, he will be heartbroken but will take revenge. 
Lets see how this proceeds. Looking forward to next update.

You put it correctly in both your comments above. Vikram has been having his way all his life and there had been no shock to him that would have at least evoked some redeemable characteristics in him. But life won't always be only on one person's side. 

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Thank you for your suggestion bro but unfortunately I don't read Hindi. Google translate doesn't do justice to any works by any author. I'm sure the story must be good but sorry to say I am unable to read it. 

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