Adultery He, She, Husband (Completed)

[Givemeextra]

Also ,author must progress the story a bit more ,this story at the moment is struck with nothing happening in each episode .

My advice would be to focus on the story more rather than the sexual encounters between Bhavani and Vikram .There has already been many encounters between them and it has  already has lost novelty .

Yeah. I did enjoy the fuck fest initially but now it has become a common feature.  I think these xxx adventures & story itself will stop only when Bavani gets pregnant. 

I was among many that asked for continuation post initial marriage episode but looking back, I think story ending with marriage would have been ideal. 

Story has Good English language usage among other strength points. Lets see how Author plans ahead.