01-12-2023, 05:00 PM
(25-11-2023, 07:26 AM)arahan90 Wrote: Very well written...take a bow...a Lil suggestion to depict minute details of her attire and ornaments...let her change some things like wearing only anklet on her left feet and her husband getting a doubt n when he asks she make some excuse like the other one is broken or something...or her getting a henna on her hands with her lovers initial letter hidden in a certain way...it gets damn erotic when they start behaving husband wife...calling illegal wife uffff....if the room is getting weared up for suhagrat let girja take care of her she getting dressed like a bride...him wearing a kurta pajama n she wearing sexy chiffon lehnga...let both of them perform some rituals as well in a kinky way like him removing away her sindoor with his own hands and she not objecting to it...if h allow i would like to have a detailed discussion with u on this plot....have a good day waiting for update...Thank you. Taking note of what you suggested. Will see if it can be incorporated.
(27-11-2023, 06:33 AM)arahan90 Wrote: Update kr do bhai...can't wait to see them be together
(29-11-2023, 04:16 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Missing your writings badly.....Trying to get an update done as soon as I can
(29-11-2023, 11:51 PM)a2011 Wrote: Please update..Doing so today
(30-11-2023, 06:23 AM)Joseph Rayman Wrote: Nice updateThanks.
(01-12-2023, 07:10 AM)arahan90 Wrote: Wait nhi ho rha please update now...also please depict every minute detail of her dress n the way she carries it...one session with kid present will make it more hot....This will be in the episode after the next update but not sure of the kid being present part.
Have been writing for the past one week or so every time I get a little time. Finally got one post ready. Thanks for your patience