28-11-2023, 05:45 PM
(25-11-2023, 10:05 AM)Martin Roy Wrote: Wow, just amazing. there is some sudden character change in Aditi now. Totally happy you skipped the Goa part now, teasing and seducing parts are the best in erotic story, and you are doing it well. And keeping Varun as not knowing anything is all good, the original story got out of hand, when he knew all at once. Don't make him weak husband like original. It's okay, he doesn't know anything. Slow seduction and slow removal of inhibition from Aditi is also good. Hope you complete the story with complete satisfaction. All the best
It is very difficult to match the original writer story as he was perfect and I am still trying to work out most of the things and make necessary changes so it can be modified and re-written
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