[Martin Roy]

Wow, just amazing. there is some sudden character change in Aditi now. Totally happy you skipped the Goa part now, teasing and seducing parts are the best in erotic story, and you are doing it well. And keeping Varun as not knowing anything is all good, the original story got out of hand, when he knew all at once. Don't make him weak husband like original. It's okay, he doesn't know anything. Slow seduction and slow removal of inhibition from Aditi is also good. Hope you complete the story with complete satisfaction. All the best