25-11-2023, 07:26 AM
Very well written...take a bow...a Lil suggestion to depict minute details of her attire and ornaments...let her change some things like wearing only anklet on her left feet and her husband getting a doubt n when he asks she make some excuse like the other one is broken or something...or her getting a henna on her hands with her lovers initial letter hidden in a certain way...it gets damn erotic when they start behaving husband wife...calling illegal wife uffff....if the room is getting weared up for suhagrat let girja take care of her she getting dressed like a bride...him wearing a kurta pajama n she wearing sexy chiffon lehnga...let both of them perform some rituals as well in a kinky way like him removing away her sindoor with his own hands and she not objecting to it...if h allow i would like to have a detailed discussion with u on this plot....have a good day waiting for update...