08-11-2023, 01:56 AM
Hi Jananilover,
Your wonderful writer and have good skills.
But the delay between the updates making readers forgetting about previous updates.
The story not getting any where from first update he try to suduce her and she let him do some stuff and stop. This is what happening nothing more. Please try to speed up things and give regular updates.
Your wonderful writer and have good skills.
But the delay between the updates making readers forgetting about previous updates.
The story not getting any where from first update he try to suduce her and she let him do some stuff and stop. This is what happening nothing more. Please try to speed up things and give regular updates.
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