07-11-2023, 08:59 PM
(07-11-2023, 11:13 AM)naag.champa Wrote: Chapter 3
With a sly smile, Myra looked at that man thought, "Oh, the adventures we could have had," before disappearing into the crowd.
excellent plot and superb narration
After reading the story I thought "The adventures myra could have had"
eagerly waiting to see what would myra do with her "fountain of youth"
my humble opinion is to include luna on the adventures too
peace