07-11-2023, 08:43 PM
(06-11-2023, 07:36 AM)whocarez Wrote: interesting!
(06-11-2023, 10:24 AM)Saikarthik Wrote: Excellent bro loved it keep going waiting for next one
(06-11-2023, 11:30 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Interesting.. Nice idea, bro..
But please focus on the other story more..
(06-11-2023, 11:23 PM)Muralimm Wrote: This is new idea and your naration is great
Keep posting
(07-11-2023, 05:54 AM)Ankit Roy Wrote: Nice Start
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(07-11-2023, 03:48 PM)kohli2458 Wrote: Nice start. Keep going
(07-11-2023, 03:51 PM)Rajesh49 Wrote: Best story do far
(07-11-2023, 04:21 PM)Chandan Wrote: great start
I am so happy that you all find this story entertaining
I will be posting an update soon
peace