Adultery మగ దిక్కు

[kartheek_raju]

Episode is quite somewhat dramatic which I felt , why  because of the narration.
From the very beginning the narrator is the son who is narrating the story, here coming to this episode he has to co-relate the incidents and talk about the present and go back to previous state like a little sort of flashback and again coming to the present state felt me in that way.  Narration perspective it is good and going smoothly but those words what Ahmed has spoke to the heroine of the story is quite connecting and giving some sort of positive vibes to open up from heroine perspective which happened very fast which is very fast approach. If you could have blend a little bit of conversation and the magic moments happening there would have been a Bonanza to the story and would help in building the strong base.

I hope I haven't disappointed anyone with the above statement. If anyone feels that I am wrong , please excuse me and I also apologize for hurting the feelings of the other readers.

Happy reading  and writing...

A good episode.

Hi, firstly thank you so much.. this gave me more boost. As a writer I'm so happy that one who read and the reader took initiative to suggest to improvise the narration.. thanks a lot brother. 

Yes i felt that what you are saying.  But as this is mostly real experience where my mother kumari is in relation with owner son I'm explaining what happened truly most of the times an couldn't created much drama..but I'm taking you suggestion so happily will improve in that area