23-10-2023, 10:28 AM
(This post was last modified: 23-10-2023, 10:29 AM by NovelNavel. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
I feel debu could have been removed from the story from the point of bobbyfication, may be sent to prostitution.
What is the need to bring back to the same home from where she got jailed and bobbified. Only to bring more humiliation?
What are others going to gain out of it.
Appreciate your writing.
What is the need to bring back to the same home from where she got jailed and bobbified. Only to bring more humiliation?
What are others going to gain out of it.
Appreciate your writing.