Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
(18-10-2023, 11:17 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: Hi Krish,

I agree with Bineesh! on all points.
He is absolutely right when he says that we, -the readers- (most of us!) have internalised 
the last chapter's and the ending so much that any change will lead to aberrations and discord.

Besides many readers and fans, I also plead for some new chapters (perhaps as a short 4th part 
and possibly more detailed than the last three chapters in the story) from Meera's point of view 
"without changing the ending!" to summarise the happenings.

I would welcome that from the bottom of my heart.

In this sense
All the best

Lollobionda

I find it interesting to vote for part 4.

However, I disagree with the ending of part 3. Let Meera move with Desai to honour her character. Part 4 can be from Meera POV. During her journey, she can re-visit previous parts paving the readers a glimpse of her inner thoughts and motivation explaining her actions and reactions.

Part 4 may unite Meera with Krish!

manasi
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Chapter-1 - by krish_999 - 10-10-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: Chapter-1 - by Givemeextra - 10-10-2020, 11:00 AM
Chapter - 2 - by krish_999 - 17-10-2020, 01:04 AM
Chapter - 3 - by krish_999 - 23-10-2020, 11:52 PM
Chapter-5 - by krish_999 - 04-11-2020, 11:47 PM
Chapter - Six - by krish_999 - 12-11-2020, 07:57 PM
Chapter-7 - by krish_999 - 19-11-2020, 07:11 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 24-11-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 25-11-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 10:00 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 11:05 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed) - by manasi - 21-10-2023, 01:32 PM



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