21-10-2023, 12:01 PM
(This post was last modified: 22-10-2023, 09:21 AM by Ramukakalegend. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.
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Due to fan demand, decided to restarting story from where the last writer left...(although i had completely different plan)
kahaani restart horahi hai jahan pichle writer ne chori thi, parantu yeh ofcourse alternate continuation hai and my vision (with some changes)
Tou kahaani ruki thi is mod par, Shaila jab apni behen Naila aur uske husband Rohan ke saath ek qareebi mall mein gayi thi. Kuch shopping ke baad Rohan jaan buj kar Shaila ko apnay ek harami dost Danny ki jewellery ki dukaan le legaya aur naila ke saath duusri dukan pe chala gaya ....wahan Danny ne chali chaal aur phir Shaila ne bitaye chand rangeelay lamhay Danny ke saath uski dukan ke store room mein. Rohan ke message ke aatay Danny Shaila ko chordeta hai aur dono showroon mein wapis aye jahan koi aur nahi tha. Danny ne shaila ko ek sonay ki kamarband gift kardi.
Phir Rohan Naila wapis aye aur shaila ko gift delakar rawaana hogaye ghar ke liye
Ab aagay
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Update 1: Shaila ki kashmakash
Idhar Rohan aur Naila Shaila ko ghar chhod kar chale jaate hai.......Shaila ghar par kisiko nahi dekh kar....... Harya se jaa kar chudwane ka sochati hai.......kyunki kal raat se wo pyassi thi......aur aaj ka din bhi itna romaanchit jo raha tha......
Shaila ki agan bhadki hui thi... aur woh uttejit hui chhat par jaati hai.... Harya ke quarter me...... lekin usse Harya nahi dikhata hai......phir wo usse kitchen me, garden har jagah dhundati hai......lekin Harya usse kahi nahi dikhata.......Shaila thoda chidate huye kahti hai......
Shaila : akhir kaha gaya ye kambakht Harya......mai itni pyassi hoo..... aur mil nahi raha...... aur abhi ghar pe koi hai bhi nahi
Tabhi Shaila Harya ka phone try karti hai.......lekin uska phone bhi swich off tha......jisase Shaila ki bechaini badhane lagti hai.......aur apni pyass me tadpaati rahti hai........
Shaam ko saahil wapis aya aur Salim bhi. Shaila ummeed mein thi hariya saath aayega..lekin woh niraash hogayi....
Khaana paros kar.... salim shaila se puuchta hai kaisa raha naila rohan ke saath mall ka samay. Shaila uninterested hokay jawab deti hai.... aur bolti hai naila ne mujhe ek gift diya aur help ki shopping mein kuch dresses ke liye....
Phir shaila ke khayalon mein Danny ke sath bitaye woh rangeen lamhay saamnay ajatay hai.... jisse woh apni chut mein hulchul ehsaaas hota hai
Wahan salim usse kuch bol rahay thay lekkn shaila gum hogayi thi danny ke harkaton se aur hariya ki aas meein ......
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Shaila uth ke bedroom mein agayi aur change karli nighty mein. Salim aakay dharaam se bed par let gaye
Salim sochukay thay...saahil ki koi khaas fikr nhi thi....aur yahan shaila bechain karwatein badal rahi thi ya kabhi bed se utar kar walk karleti aas paas.... uski phuddi ke bheetae bohot khujli si horahi hai....hawas ab shaila mein dheeray dheerya in mahinon mein pravesh karchuka tha lekin poori tarah se haawi nhi hua hai. Shaila ke anusar yeh ek prem katha hai uski aur harya ki... aur woh haryaa ke sath wafa karna chahti hai. Woh sochnay lagti hai ke kaise anjaan logon ke chuune se bhi woh bikharnay lagtihl hai... yahan tak kuch tou choom tak letay hain.... woh khud pe qaabu nhi rakh pati hai.
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(Shaila ke khayalon mein woh manzar jab danny ne uske pet ko chooma)
Shaila khayalon mein ek toofan roop dhaarnay laga kaamvaasna se peedit
Usay ek awaaz ayi...
(Harya ki Premika Shaila) : yeh mera behekna duusre mardon ke sath sahi nhi hai.... harya ji ne mera kitna khayal rakha hai....dance sikhaya.... aur jitwaya.... mere sath kabhi badtameezi nhi ki....meri jaan bhi bachayi...aur main yahan apne jism ko duusre ke haathon mein saunp deti hoon .... kya hogaya hai mujhe. Harya ji kya sochengay
(Salim ki Biwi Shaila) : yeh tu kya keh rahi hai.... harya kya sochengay yeh kabse tujhe farq parne laga.... tujhe yeh sochna chaiye ke tu nay paap kiya hai....bhool gayi hai tu ki tu salim khan ki biwi hai...
(Premika) main bhooli nhi hoon....mainay lakh koshish ki sambhalnay ko khud ko... aur phir...competition bhi tou jeetna tha... aur sirf harya kaam aya.... salim ne tou saath bhi nhi diya.... aur unhon ne mera harya ka romance tou dekha hoga stage par.... isliye unhe koo aitraz nhi shayad....aur lekin main kya karti...harya ke romantic andaaz ne mujhe aisa akarshit kiya ke main khud ko usay saunpti chali gayi
(Biwi) baat sirf dance contest jeetnay ki thi...tu tou roz uska bistar garam karne pe tuli hai....
(Premika) harya ji ko gurudakshna bhi tou deni thi....itna haq tou banta hai unka jaise unhon ne mera khayaal rakha...
(Biwi) maan letay hain ke iss durbhagya mein tumhe apni pakewza chut ka sauda iss ghatia tareeqay se gurudakshna mein karna padgaya lekin tum tou pyaasi hogayi uski
(Premika) mujhe kya pata tha hum dono ko ek duusre se prem hojayega.... aur woh sampoorna hua uss raat jaise koi naya bhagya shuru hua meri jeevan ka, jiski shuruat uss raat hui jab mere preminguru ne woh sukh diya rajhastan ki raeth pe khulay aaasman mein jo sirf ek Mahapremi de sakta hai....honeymoon ke baad salim kahin nahi legayaye mijhe.... aur yahan meray is premi guru ne aisa anoka yaadgar anubhav diya jo shayad hi koi premika ko milay... aisi raatein filmon mein dekhayi jaati hain
Mujhe tou asal zindagi aisi experience dilayi
Tou bhala main iss premi ko dukh nhi de sakti
Ek teesri awaz judti hai shaila ke mann mein
(Hawasi Shaila) kya raat thi woh..mm jism ka ang ang mein raungthay kharay hogaye the...humara husn hi aisa hai ... humari pyaas bohot adhuri rahi in saalon mein... ab jaakay maza araha hai... tou bhala thora idhar udhar airay ghairay thora humara swadh chak le tou kya hojayega...kaunsa sab ke saath raat guzarni hai
(BS) nhi yeh sab galat hai... hum biwi hain kisi ke yeh sab shobha nhi deta aur paap hai
(HS) chup kar ... shaila soch jab bhi kisi ghair mard market mein dheel di hai... humara munafa hi hua hai..
(PS) lekin woh harya ki nazarandaazi mein hua joke unke saath dhoka hai...main koi dhandaywali aurat nhi hoon
(BS) harya ke saath??? Arey salim ke saath dhokay ka kya??
Hawasi shaila iss biwi shaila ki awaaz ko dabatay huay
(HS) arey kya ghisi piti purani soch ... aagay barhna hai tou bold aur hona sabne yeh bataya hai .... dhoka woka kuch nhi hai.... apna faida dekho aur mazay se jiyo.... phoolwalay ke paas se faida hua aur khud ke mazay huay.... auto mein woh cute raju se free ride mili... aur ab danny ke dukaan mein jo mazay diyay humne usne tou yeh sonay ki belt hi de daaali... ek raat guzar lein usse tou pata nhi dukaan hi na humaray naam kardain!!
(PS) nhi nhi main koi bazaaru aurat nhi... main sirf harya ki hoon
(Hs) acha chalo harya hi sahi... bas meri baat yaad rakhna hamein bohot faida milsakta hai
(Ps) nhi salim mere pati hai aur harya mera premi... aur yeh baat ghar ki hai ghar mein rahegi
Shaila ka yeh aapsi tufan tham jata hai... lekin ab woh harya ki talaash mein wapos gum hojati hai
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late night phir ek chakkar lagati hai..... harya ke room tak....lekin niraash hokar wapis room tak jaati hai...lekin phir usay sidiyon pe saahil milta hai.
Shaila hairaan hogi sidiyon pe saahil ab tak soya nahi...saahil bolega ke usay college function ke drama pe daala gaya hai woh rehearse kar raha tha... phir woh yeh bolega ke hariya kaka nhi dikh rahay .
Shaila bas kahegi jao ab sojao.... sahil chup chaap chala jayega...
Lekjn usay bhi pata hai shaila kyun baahar thi.
Shaila thora nirasha chupa kar apnay kamray mein jayegi...aur soch mein duub jayegi...ke woh apni aaj raat jo pyaas lagi hai woh kaise bhujayegi... salim ko hilati hai thora lekin salim nhi hiltay.... woh bas kamray se connected balcony pe hawa khaati hai soch mein...aur kisi tarah neend ki goli lekay so jati hai. Woh ye asha karti hai shayad harya subha tak ajeyga........
kahaani restart horahi hai jahan pichle writer ne chori thi, parantu yeh ofcourse alternate continuation hai and my vision (with some changes)
Tou kahaani ruki thi is mod par, Shaila jab apni behen Naila aur uske husband Rohan ke saath ek qareebi mall mein gayi thi. Kuch shopping ke baad Rohan jaan buj kar Shaila ko apnay ek harami dost Danny ki jewellery ki dukaan le legaya aur naila ke saath duusri dukan pe chala gaya ....wahan Danny ne chali chaal aur phir Shaila ne bitaye chand rangeelay lamhay Danny ke saath uski dukan ke store room mein. Rohan ke message ke aatay Danny Shaila ko chordeta hai aur dono showroon mein wapis aye jahan koi aur nahi tha. Danny ne shaila ko ek sonay ki kamarband gift kardi.
Phir Rohan Naila wapis aye aur shaila ko gift delakar rawaana hogaye ghar ke liye
Ab aagay
-------‐--‐-----------------------------------------------------------------------------‐-------------------------------------
Update 1: Shaila ki kashmakash
Idhar Rohan aur Naila Shaila ko ghar chhod kar chale jaate hai.......Shaila ghar par kisiko nahi dekh kar....... Harya se jaa kar chudwane ka sochati hai.......kyunki kal raat se wo pyassi thi......aur aaj ka din bhi itna romaanchit jo raha tha......
Shaila ki agan bhadki hui thi... aur woh uttejit hui chhat par jaati hai.... Harya ke quarter me...... lekin usse Harya nahi dikhata hai......phir wo usse kitchen me, garden har jagah dhundati hai......lekin Harya usse kahi nahi dikhata.......Shaila thoda chidate huye kahti hai......
Shaila : akhir kaha gaya ye kambakht Harya......mai itni pyassi hoo..... aur mil nahi raha...... aur abhi ghar pe koi hai bhi nahi
Tabhi Shaila Harya ka phone try karti hai.......lekin uska phone bhi swich off tha......jisase Shaila ki bechaini badhane lagti hai.......aur apni pyass me tadpaati rahti hai........
Shaam ko saahil wapis aya aur Salim bhi. Shaila ummeed mein thi hariya saath aayega..lekin woh niraash hogayi....
Khaana paros kar.... salim shaila se puuchta hai kaisa raha naila rohan ke saath mall ka samay. Shaila uninterested hokay jawab deti hai.... aur bolti hai naila ne mujhe ek gift diya aur help ki shopping mein kuch dresses ke liye....
Phir shaila ke khayalon mein Danny ke sath bitaye woh rangeen lamhay saamnay ajatay hai.... jisse woh apni chut mein hulchul ehsaaas hota hai
Wahan salim usse kuch bol rahay thay lekkn shaila gum hogayi thi danny ke harkaton se aur hariya ki aas meein ......
Shaila uth ke bedroom mein agayi aur change karli nighty mein. Salim aakay dharaam se bed par let gaye
Salim sochukay thay...saahil ki koi khaas fikr nhi thi....aur yahan shaila bechain karwatein badal rahi thi ya kabhi bed se utar kar walk karleti aas paas.... uski phuddi ke bheetae bohot khujli si horahi hai....hawas ab shaila mein dheeray dheerya in mahinon mein pravesh karchuka tha lekin poori tarah se haawi nhi hua hai. Shaila ke anusar yeh ek prem katha hai uski aur harya ki... aur woh haryaa ke sath wafa karna chahti hai. Woh sochnay lagti hai ke kaise anjaan logon ke chuune se bhi woh bikharnay lagtihl hai... yahan tak kuch tou choom tak letay hain.... woh khud pe qaabu nhi rakh pati hai.
(Shaila ke khayalon mein woh manzar jab danny ne uske pet ko chooma)
Shaila khayalon mein ek toofan roop dhaarnay laga kaamvaasna se peedit
Usay ek awaaz ayi...
(Harya ki Premika Shaila) : yeh mera behekna duusre mardon ke sath sahi nhi hai.... harya ji ne mera kitna khayal rakha hai....dance sikhaya.... aur jitwaya.... mere sath kabhi badtameezi nhi ki....meri jaan bhi bachayi...aur main yahan apne jism ko duusre ke haathon mein saunp deti hoon .... kya hogaya hai mujhe. Harya ji kya sochengay
(Salim ki Biwi Shaila) : yeh tu kya keh rahi hai.... harya kya sochengay yeh kabse tujhe farq parne laga.... tujhe yeh sochna chaiye ke tu nay paap kiya hai....bhool gayi hai tu ki tu salim khan ki biwi hai...
(Premika) main bhooli nhi hoon....mainay lakh koshish ki sambhalnay ko khud ko... aur phir...competition bhi tou jeetna tha... aur sirf harya kaam aya.... salim ne tou saath bhi nhi diya.... aur unhon ne mera harya ka romance tou dekha hoga stage par.... isliye unhe koo aitraz nhi shayad....aur lekin main kya karti...harya ke romantic andaaz ne mujhe aisa akarshit kiya ke main khud ko usay saunpti chali gayi
(Biwi) baat sirf dance contest jeetnay ki thi...tu tou roz uska bistar garam karne pe tuli hai....
(Premika) harya ji ko gurudakshna bhi tou deni thi....itna haq tou banta hai unka jaise unhon ne mera khayaal rakha...
(Biwi) maan letay hain ke iss durbhagya mein tumhe apni pakewza chut ka sauda iss ghatia tareeqay se gurudakshna mein karna padgaya lekin tum tou pyaasi hogayi uski
(Premika) mujhe kya pata tha hum dono ko ek duusre se prem hojayega.... aur woh sampoorna hua uss raat jaise koi naya bhagya shuru hua meri jeevan ka, jiski shuruat uss raat hui jab mere preminguru ne woh sukh diya rajhastan ki raeth pe khulay aaasman mein jo sirf ek Mahapremi de sakta hai....honeymoon ke baad salim kahin nahi legayaye mijhe.... aur yahan meray is premi guru ne aisa anoka yaadgar anubhav diya jo shayad hi koi premika ko milay... aisi raatein filmon mein dekhayi jaati hain
Mujhe tou asal zindagi aisi experience dilayi
Tou bhala main iss premi ko dukh nhi de sakti
Ek teesri awaz judti hai shaila ke mann mein
(Hawasi Shaila) kya raat thi woh..mm jism ka ang ang mein raungthay kharay hogaye the...humara husn hi aisa hai ... humari pyaas bohot adhuri rahi in saalon mein... ab jaakay maza araha hai... tou bhala thora idhar udhar airay ghairay thora humara swadh chak le tou kya hojayega...kaunsa sab ke saath raat guzarni hai
(BS) nhi yeh sab galat hai... hum biwi hain kisi ke yeh sab shobha nhi deta aur paap hai
(HS) chup kar ... shaila soch jab bhi kisi ghair mard market mein dheel di hai... humara munafa hi hua hai..
(PS) lekin woh harya ki nazarandaazi mein hua joke unke saath dhoka hai...main koi dhandaywali aurat nhi hoon
(BS) harya ke saath??? Arey salim ke saath dhokay ka kya??
Hawasi shaila iss biwi shaila ki awaaz ko dabatay huay
(HS) arey kya ghisi piti purani soch ... aagay barhna hai tou bold aur hona sabne yeh bataya hai .... dhoka woka kuch nhi hai.... apna faida dekho aur mazay se jiyo.... phoolwalay ke paas se faida hua aur khud ke mazay huay.... auto mein woh cute raju se free ride mili... aur ab danny ke dukaan mein jo mazay diyay humne usne tou yeh sonay ki belt hi de daaali... ek raat guzar lein usse tou pata nhi dukaan hi na humaray naam kardain!!
(PS) nhi nhi main koi bazaaru aurat nhi... main sirf harya ki hoon
(Hs) acha chalo harya hi sahi... bas meri baat yaad rakhna hamein bohot faida milsakta hai
(Ps) nhi salim mere pati hai aur harya mera premi... aur yeh baat ghar ki hai ghar mein rahegi
Shaila ka yeh aapsi tufan tham jata hai... lekin ab woh harya ki talaash mein wapos gum hojati hai
..
late night phir ek chakkar lagati hai..... harya ke room tak....lekin niraash hokar wapis room tak jaati hai...lekin phir usay sidiyon pe saahil milta hai.
Shaila hairaan hogi sidiyon pe saahil ab tak soya nahi...saahil bolega ke usay college function ke drama pe daala gaya hai woh rehearse kar raha tha... phir woh yeh bolega ke hariya kaka nhi dikh rahay .
Shaila bas kahegi jao ab sojao.... sahil chup chaap chala jayega...
Lekjn usay bhi pata hai shaila kyun baahar thi.
Shaila thora nirasha chupa kar apnay kamray mein jayegi...aur soch mein duub jayegi...ke woh apni aaj raat jo pyaas lagi hai woh kaise bhujayegi... salim ko hilati hai thora lekin salim nhi hiltay.... woh bas kamray se connected balcony pe hawa khaati hai soch mein...aur kisi tarah neend ki goli lekay so jati hai. Woh ye asha karti hai shayad harya subha tak ajeyga........
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