Adultery He, She, Husband (Completed)

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The report of the husband's detective is more torture tor him

It won't be soon.

very lazy writing to make the detective so dumb that he is fooled by Vikram and Bhavani. There was no point in involving the detective if he could not do his job twice, it seems it was added as filler while you were thinking of the next part of the story. At the moment the story is becoming very unintelligent and lengthy and without much story progression. Bhavani and Girja coming together also seem not believable. Initial episodes during the wedding were good since then the story has been moving at a snail's pace

This is a English version of my earlier Tamil story so I didn't need a filler for the time to be taken to think of the next part of the story. 

I hope Bhavani is found out soon and the romp with Vikram is exposed...though it might get prolonged right upto her getting pregnant...

If this happens soon then the story would have to finish soon too.

superb update

Thanks

please update soon

Will do. 

Many times i rode vikram as james bond 007.?

??? Couldn't get you. 

I'm a little smarter now.
Because I got an overview of the work of "private dedective's" in India.
(Sorry, it sounds like little cynicism. But it is not meant that way. Merely in connection with the story!!!) 

Namely:

The ones to be watched are the real super dedective's.
"Bevani, Vikram etc."
They are even better than Miss Marpel and Sherlock Holmes & Dr. Watsen.

The ones who do the professional job of a dedective on the other hand is the laughing stock.
"He is even more stupid and brainless than the Daltons on Lucky Luke ....


In this sense
All the best and hope to see you soon with a new update

Lollobionda

Took some time to write the update as had other interferences. 

Wonderful

Thanks

Update plz

Doing so now.

Thanks to all the readers and those who took the time to comment.