15-10-2023, 04:01 PM
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(13-10-2023, 10:18 PM)seansean007 Wrote: A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.
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