14-10-2023, 10:55 PM
Amazing updates. waiting for next.
Just one point, you are writing a lot repetitive, while she is overthinking about him, makes a bit dull same stuff stretched a bit. Otherwise great narration and plot. Thanks
Just one point, you are writing a lot repetitive, while she is overthinking about him, makes a bit dull same stuff stretched a bit. Otherwise great narration and plot. Thanks