Adultery He, She, Husband (Completed)

[abhinay67]

very lazy writing to make the detective so dumb that he is fooled by Vikram and Bhavani. There was no point in involving the detective if he could not do his job twice, it seems it was added as filler while you were thinking of the next part of the story. At the moment the story is becoming very unintelligent and lengthy and without much story progression. Bhavani and Girja coming together also seem not believable. Initial episodes during the wedding were good since then the story has been moving at a snail's pace