12-10-2023, 05:29 PM
(09-10-2023, 05:17 PM)abcturbine Wrote: Superb......Thank you, I'll try to continue in the same vein.
Amazing....
Sensational...
Too good to Resist......
(10-10-2023, 02:09 AM)a2011 Wrote: Awesome update as usualThank you very much
(10-10-2023, 08:40 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: Very Nice Update.What have you got against the poor husband isn't he suffering enough thinking his wife and Vikram are putting one over him
Ultimate sinful gift to Mohan [but he should be tortured someway about the baby. Life long torture yeahhhhh]
(10-10-2023, 07:16 PM)Paty@123 Wrote: Vikram is useless gay, and a womeniser he will spoil the life of bhavaniYou can even add narcissist to his list of shortcomings. People like him have only one person's need in mind, their own.
(11-10-2023, 10:09 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: My view of thingsAs you said this is only a story, a story of a woman descending into degradation and whether she can get any redemption is what has to be seen. I have purposefully not made out the husband's character as a wimp willing to be trampled over by his wife and her lover. I also wanted to delve deeper into Vikram's background. Show what events shaped him, why he became what he is now. That he is not completely all bad. Any saving characteristics he has may be important to the climax of the story but there was a general feedback that going into his background disturbed the flow of the story and so I kept that portion brief. Thank you for your detailed comment. From many comments I read from various such stories many more people identify themselves with a person like Vikram then with Mohan, hence the degrading comments on the husband. Then again this is just fictitious, let everyone enjoy it in their own way.
"When you are dealing with a married woman and therefore marriage, all bets and also means are off.
As long as there is no killing involved, even if it is absolutely wanted and perhaps deserved !..."
I know this is a story.
(A very well written and good to read one, too!).
But would still like to pose the question to those readers and commentators; who are passing off
Bavani's behavior, cheating on her husband, trampling on her marriage vows with feet, and even
pleading for foreign insemination (from her lover Vikram):
How would you react if you were affected in Mohan's place?
(The author will share his view and approach in the coming chapters. I am very much looking
forward to this and have been waiting impatiently for it).
Bavani can and will not see where anything is wrong.
... and with this attitude she will not change.
She is naive, thinks and acts irrationally, makes herself a fool...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
(12-10-2023, 11:35 AM)Paty@123 Wrote: Plz update
Coming up right now.
I would wish for the readers to keep coming up with their comments. Thank you all.