04-10-2023, 11:16 PM
As a readers perspective I feel that the whole story should revolve Between the main characters rather than beating the bush around. ( The sidekicks are might be erotic and fun to read . But the real charismatic erotic sensual feeling or the other form chemistry can only happen Between them..
I do suggest to writer only focus on the important characters which are playing pivotal role and try to bring a conclusion to the same instead adding the characters and projecting the main lead of the story as a different item is quite not apprehensive. That's what I feel .
If any one who objects or have objections with my opinion on the same I do publicly apologize them on this forum for disappointing the feelings of the other fellow readers.
On a ending note so far the story connection has got good positive vibes and other forms of sensuality erotica, which I felt and for that take a bow Writer Garu.
Hope you continue the same energy and spirit on your next episodes too.
Thanks for having the opportunity to read such good writing from you.
I do suggest to writer only focus on the important characters which are playing pivotal role and try to bring a conclusion to the same instead adding the characters and projecting the main lead of the story as a different item is quite not apprehensive. That's what I feel .
If any one who objects or have objections with my opinion on the same I do publicly apologize them on this forum for disappointing the feelings of the other fellow readers.
On a ending note so far the story connection has got good positive vibes and other forms of sensuality erotica, which I felt and for that take a bow Writer Garu.
Hope you continue the same energy and spirit on your next episodes too.
Thanks for having the opportunity to read such good writing from you.
Be a happy Reader and Don't forget to appreciate the writer.
