02-10-2023, 09:09 PM
Hello tunkai bhai first up all I must say thank you for keeping Purva alive and kicking. She is dream girl (whore). and also introducing(including) fatema and Naz is like Purva making her own cult. Which is blowing up minds. Some time I wonder if you leave story incomplete ( it should never happen) no one can proceed further at least not me. I must have read thousands of stories till now but your writing is really out of the world. You write a story which includes more stories which lead to past and incidents which may become more options for further stories and adventures. We (I) can't predict what would be your next post because In every post you take turn to another track. The narrations the incidents the taughts in every aspect I am amazed. Although hope you don't mind some points were I am not saying boring but feels very regular that doesn't make excited. Please it's don't take it otherwise I am just pointing out because I am bigg fan of your writing and also Purva.
1. Naz and rasools story telling was not much effective as much as Purva narrate herself.
2. Humiliation of Purva is quite routine of course you put some different scenes every time which is huge turn on.
3. Nudeness is getting very regular but as u r including more beauties it's getting bolder and stronger.
4. I don't know what your plot is but some where I felt you shown apu too much underage. If he would be near 17 18 can be great addition in the game. (as I am admirer of incest stories I loved how you developed apu Purva fate a relations want to have more of it but I won't interfere with your storyline)
5. You can make step up for Tarun as you ended Tarun and fatema encounter very shortly as he was already into fatema.
6. It's request or suggestions this time or somehow include in story that Purva dominating other males. As it was fun to read how she dominated or took control on other ladies like fatema some whore frome Salim garage and watchmans wife. Why should always Purva drinking pee when she can feed too.
As above points are some low some very strong points/incidents for me was/is
1. Purva is wondering nude in whole village as well as nude night out on Delhi streets.
2. Having sex front of son and husband.
3. Threesome with beggar and husband.
4. 1000 miles nude journey
5. Doing puja all nude in aunties house also for kamdev.
6. She preferred pee over 15 days stale water in her own house (this was epic )
7. Encounter and spending night with thieves and beggars. And planning to beg nude for adventure.
8. Sucking apu's dick and engaging in soft (semi) sex.
9. Training naz
10. Fatemas change over
11. Getting tarun agreed for sex in house with anyone.
12. Khan sahebs liquor bath. Etc. And n numbers.
Would like to see/read in future
1. Purva bathing in piss pool or tub
2. Purva feeding her pee to others(specifically to tarun or apu or any close person) or others begging to her for her pee.
3. Purva herself makes Tarun fuck other women or like her temporary marriage.
4. Some how purva ask sex with apu or him requesting her to do so.
5. Whore dance story please as soon as possible.
6. Tarun, Nazir and apu arranging fuckfest for Naz Purva and fatema.
7. Whenever Naz and apu gets married or engaged it must be full nude wedding or engagement.
8. Some real romantic engagement of Tarun and purva like surprise date or some vacation or something
I am not much fan of scat story but I would like read one please send me which ever ur favorite. Etc etc etc
I must appreciate your efforts for writing long posts I am already feeling tired to write this much. Thank you tunkai bhai. Hope my posts won't hurt you or make rethink of your storyline. Just go on with your guts , I'll always praising and Thanking you for ur efforts and imagination. Thank you.
1. Naz and rasools story telling was not much effective as much as Purva narrate herself.
2. Humiliation of Purva is quite routine of course you put some different scenes every time which is huge turn on.
3. Nudeness is getting very regular but as u r including more beauties it's getting bolder and stronger.
4. I don't know what your plot is but some where I felt you shown apu too much underage. If he would be near 17 18 can be great addition in the game. (as I am admirer of incest stories I loved how you developed apu Purva fate a relations want to have more of it but I won't interfere with your storyline)
5. You can make step up for Tarun as you ended Tarun and fatema encounter very shortly as he was already into fatema.
6. It's request or suggestions this time or somehow include in story that Purva dominating other males. As it was fun to read how she dominated or took control on other ladies like fatema some whore frome Salim garage and watchmans wife. Why should always Purva drinking pee when she can feed too.
As above points are some low some very strong points/incidents for me was/is
1. Purva is wondering nude in whole village as well as nude night out on Delhi streets.
2. Having sex front of son and husband.
3. Threesome with beggar and husband.
4. 1000 miles nude journey
5. Doing puja all nude in aunties house also for kamdev.
6. She preferred pee over 15 days stale water in her own house (this was epic )
7. Encounter and spending night with thieves and beggars. And planning to beg nude for adventure.
8. Sucking apu's dick and engaging in soft (semi) sex.
9. Training naz
10. Fatemas change over
11. Getting tarun agreed for sex in house with anyone.
12. Khan sahebs liquor bath. Etc. And n numbers.
Would like to see/read in future
1. Purva bathing in piss pool or tub
2. Purva feeding her pee to others(specifically to tarun or apu or any close person) or others begging to her for her pee.
3. Purva herself makes Tarun fuck other women or like her temporary marriage.
4. Some how purva ask sex with apu or him requesting her to do so.
5. Whore dance story please as soon as possible.
6. Tarun, Nazir and apu arranging fuckfest for Naz Purva and fatema.
7. Whenever Naz and apu gets married or engaged it must be full nude wedding or engagement.
8. Some real romantic engagement of Tarun and purva like surprise date or some vacation or something
I am not much fan of scat story but I would like read one please send me which ever ur favorite. Etc etc etc
I must appreciate your efforts for writing long posts I am already feeling tired to write this much. Thank you tunkai bhai. Hope my posts won't hurt you or make rethink of your storyline. Just go on with your guts , I'll always praising and Thanking you for ur efforts and imagination. Thank you.
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