28-09-2023, 02:57 PM
(25-09-2023, 11:38 PM)a2011 Wrote: Amazing update...super hotThanks
(26-09-2023, 01:37 AM)abhinay67 Wrote: Great update, Would it be great if Mohan impregnates Smitha instead of Vikram doing it to Bhavani .Hmm .. that's an interesting alternative.
(26-09-2023, 01:47 PM)a2011 Wrote: Yeah, Bhavani needs to pay for the betrayal...she should suffer tremendously for the story to be fair to Mohan...That is what a lot of readers would feel.
(26-09-2023, 10:08 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: In the basic statement that arrogance and boasting lead nowhere, the proverb is synonymous withAll actions would have consequences. That is something I try to bring into my stories.
*Highness comes before a fall*
... and I would like to hold this principle before Vikram's eyes and say to him:
"who flies high, falls low".
Then shake Bavani awake before she loses "the sparrow she holds in her hand (husband Mohan);
for the dream of getting the dove that is on the roof (impostor Vikram)" and thus stands empty...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
(28-09-2023, 04:33 AM)a2011 Wrote: Bhavani is in slut mode...but at some point should feel the enormity of her betrayal and be ditched by both Vikram and Mohan...and Mohan and Smitha should fall in love and marry...in the meanwhile she should have guilt-ridden sex with Vikram...just how I envision the story...but the writer is a master storyteller so waiting for it to unfold...Well you have to wait for the story to unfold to know what happens.